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Heat

She'd kissed him last night and he'd pushed her away.

It may have had something to do with her approach.

She'd cornered him in the basement and had basically tried to jump him.

And then Spike had blushed and stammered and well...

She'd been totally turned off.

He almost hadn't needed to push her away. When she saw him acting so... unlike her fantasies... hell, her memories, she'd needed to be away from him to change her entire way of looking at him.

Spike had turned her entire body to an inferno, before.

And now he was leaving her luke-warm.

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Date: 2003-02-18 05:21 pm (UTC)
jic: Daniel Jackson (SG1) firing weapon, caption "skill to do comes of doing" (Default)
From: [personal profile] jic
*snerk*

I'd be laughing harder if I thought they'd end up together in your world.

I like the imagery. Very plausible scenario.

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Date: 2003-02-18 05:28 pm (UTC)
ext_1774: butterfly against blue background (Default)
From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you.

And yeah, I couldn't actually let them... *shudder* do anything.

One can't deny one's own inner nature, I suppose. And my inner nature is telling Buffy to get away from Spike. Of course, I said the same thing about Angel, and Parker, and Riley, once he started getting suck jobs (I was fine with him 'til then... as Buffy's boyfriend at least. He bored the hell out of me, but he seemed nice. Doomed, but nice.)

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Date: 2003-02-18 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soulfictionlady.livejournal.com
Very lovely. Pretty plausible as well. He did get more... human... I guess is the word I'm looking for. With a soul he has better access to emotions and stuff that he couldn't before :)

Write more? Please!?

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Date: 2003-02-18 11:53 pm (UTC)
ext_1774: butterfly against blue background (Default)
From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

I might write more of it. It actually would fit right into canon, right after First Date.

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