Fic Link: On the Rocks (Star Wars, Anakin/Obi-Wan, R/NC-17)

[butterfly]

So, Anakin convinced me that he and Obi-Wan really needed to have sex and he assured me that he and Obi-Wan could so totally have sex in 3,000 words or less.

As this story shows, Anakin Skywalker is a dirty liar, and what was supposed to be a slashy, smutty, short one-off has become a slashy, somewhat smutty, somewhat angsty 6,500+ word one-off, completely unrelated to any White Rabbits business.

I mean, glory, it was too big to post. That's never happened to me before. This is Anakin's fault, as well, by the way. Because... it just is.

Title: On the Rocks
Status: Complete
Author: Diana Michelle (butterfly)
Pairings: Anakin/Obi-Wan; Obi-Wan/f.
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexuality; implications of underaged sexual feelings; also, Obi-Wan drinks alcohol.
Disclaimer: Not Lucas, don't own a thing, not making any money.

Summary: Anakin, Obi-Wan, and the appeal of the flesh.
Story Link: http://dianamichelle.5u.com/analysis/starwars/fanfic/ontherocksfic.html

Comments

[teot.livejournal.com]

That story was so hot and then you just *crushed* me. So mean! *grin*

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

*is mean*

*also, has an evil laugh*

And thank you. Am glad both the smut and the angst worked.

[thalia-seawood.livejournal.com]

Oh my. I love this story. Am still crushed by the ending, though. Obi-Wan is an idiot - he does love Anakin after all, but he's too much a Jedi to admit his emotions openly.

I have to admit that I'm hoping for a sequel. I guess my hope will be in vain, because for some pairings happy endings are not a given. *sigh*

Thanks for writing this!

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

Oh my. I love this story. Am still crushed by the ending, though. Obi-Wan is an idiot - he does love Anakin after all, but he's too much a Jedi to admit his emotions openly.

He is (both an idiot and too much of a Jedi). I love them both so much that it pains me not to have them be cuddly and sappy. But it's a good pain.

I have to admit that I'm hoping for a sequel. I guess my hope will be in vain, because for some pairings happy endings are not a given. *sigh*

The thing that comforts me about A/O is that they do get a happy ending. They just have to wait a couple of decades. And die.

Um.

Thanks for writing this!

You're welcome. Thank you for reading and feedbacking. It is a comfort and joy.

[whitedestiny1x2.livejournal.com]

Wow . . . angsty, heart-breaking, and so, so beautiful. I could see everything happening; your words are so strong and solid, yet gentle in their flow and meaning. OMGILOVETHAT! This is so amazingly written, this fic is wonderful! And the sex scene isn't pointless, there's something behind it and I thought it was really angsty. Still hawt, though, oh yes, very much so!

Arrgh, amazing job, as always! I can't wait to see more Stah Wahs fics from you! ^^ Especially White Rabbits! :D

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Wow . . . angsty, heart-breaking, and so, so beautiful. I could see everything happening; your words are so strong and solid, yet gentle in their flow and meaning.

That is such a wonderful compliment. Thank you.

OMGILOVETHAT! This is so amazingly written, this fic is wonderful! And the sex scene isn't pointless, there's something behind it and I thought it was really angsty. Still hawt, though, oh yes, very much so!

I'm so glad that the sex all felt natural and plot-based. Yay.

Arrgh, amazing job, as always! I can't wait to see more Stah Wahs fics from you! ^^ Especially White Rabbits! :D

Thank you! The SW is definitely eating my brain.

[bell]

:DDDDDDDDDDDD Brilliant characterization here, for both of them, but Obi-Wan especially.

And now he had two conflicting promises – one to the Order, one to Anakin.

In the end, the choice wasn’t a choice at all.

Hee. And there, in a nutshell, is precisely the reason why they shouldn't. (Or perhaps why they might as well go ahead, since they've gone so far.) Obi-Wan already choses Anakin above the Order. Continuing with that line of thought, though it's Anakin who initiates the sex and insists of having the love tied in with it, it's Obi-Wan who feels the strongest (physically and emotionally). Anakin has the shields to hide his feelings from others but Obi-Wan has his own shields to hide his emotions from himself.

Anakin always was better behaved when he was getting what he wanted.

Oh, definitely.

“My dear, sweet Anakin,” ... “My Anakin.”

What was that you were saying about posessions, Obi-Wan? *grins* I love that Anakin comes here. Orgasm from emotion!

Odd complaint: I think there was a bit too much emphasis on the couch, especially considering how little, um, action actually happens on it. I ended up with a mental image of the apartment as a closed window and one big couch. Other rooms were mentioned but no furniture. Made me wonder about Anakin's interior-decorating choices, and how that might be why he later he spends so much time at Padme's place.

I'm sorry Obi-Wan is left unsatisfied at the end. Seems like he always get the short end of the stick in these kinds of stories. *shakes head*

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Brilliant characterization here, for both of them, but Obi-Wan especially.

Thank you. Obi-Wan really is my favorite character in the entire saga, so... yes, I'm very glad that he feels real and in character.

Hee. And there, in a nutshell, is precisely the reason why they shouldn't. (Or perhaps why they might as well go ahead, since they've gone so far.) Obi-Wan already choses Anakin above the Order. Continuing with that line of thought, though it's Anakin who initiates the sex and insists of having the love tied in with it, it's Obi-Wan who feels the strongest (physically and emotionally). Anakin has the shields to hide his feelings from others but Obi-Wan has his own shields to hide his emotions from himself.

Yes, just... yes. Exactly.

What was that you were saying about posessions, Obi-Wan? *grins* I love that Anakin comes here. Orgasm from emotion!

Hee, yes, and he'd deny it all, after. He doesn't in the least think of Anakin as 'his'. Nope. Wouldn't dream of it.

Odd complaint: I think there was a bit too much emphasis on the couch, especially considering how little, um, action actually happens on it. I ended up with a mental image of the apartment as a closed window and one big couch. Other rooms were mentioned but no furniture. Made me wonder about Anakin's interior-decorating choices, and how that might be why he later he spends so much time at Padme's place.

Actually, the room thing was intentional (though possibly it didn't work as well as I'd hoped... description of place is the biggest thing that I'm still working on as a writer, as I know that it is one of my weakest points, if not my weakest). Anakin hasn't actually moved in yet, just been assigned the room. It might even be his first time in it, though Obi-Wan wouldn't know for sure.

I'm sorry Obi-Wan is left unsatisfied at the end. Seems like he always get the short end of the stick in these kinds of stories. *shakes head*

Well, Anakin was all set to give Obi-Wan a killer blowjob until he got all Jedi. Hmm. I wonder if I'm subconsciously punishing Obi-Wan for not giving in to Anakin's demands?

Thank you, again. Detailed feedback is delicious and wonderful, like wet!Obi-Wan.

[imadra-blue.livejournal.com]

You realize you are now my favoritest Anakin/Obi-Wan writer ever, right? That was just amazing. You blew my mind away. That was in-fucking-credible. I don't say things like this lightly, I am so unforgivably picky when it comes to fanfic and SW (because I love SW like no other fandom). If I tried to point out all the things I liked in here, all the things I enjoyed and made me believe it, then we'd be here all day. I love the whole thing, from start to finish. You've won my heart with this, totally.

And I apologize for being behind on my reading of White Rabbits. I got sick last night and wasn't up for much reading, but I shall certainly read more today. I'm running off to rec this in my journal right now. :D

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

You realize you are now my favoritest Anakin/Obi-Wan writer ever, right? That was just amazing. You blew my mind away. That was in-fucking-credible. I don't say things like this lightly, I am so unforgivably picky when it comes to fanfic and SW (because I love SW like no other fandom). If I tried to point out all the things I liked in here, all the things I enjoyed and made me believe it, then we'd be here all day. I love the whole thing, from start to finish. You've won my heart with this, totally.

Well, I'm just going to be in the corner, blushing my head off. Don't mind me.

Seriously, wow, thank you so much. Both for the wonderful words here and for the recs. I'm overwhelmed and thrilled. Thank you.

[imadra-blue.livejournal.com]

You are welcome. You deserve it. :D

[rabidfangurl.livejournal.com]

Um. Guh. ::sponges up melted brain::

Really, there's nothing I can say here, except maybe "poor Obi-Wan", because he missed out on what was shaping up to be a really great blowjob. He really needs to get his head out of his ass.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

Um. Guh. ::sponges up melted brain::

Really, there's nothing I can say here, except maybe "poor Obi-Wan", because he missed out on what was shaping up to be a really great blowjob. He really needs to get his head out of his ass.

He really did fuck that up for himself, didn't he? Silly Jedi.

[shadowfeet.livejournal.com]

*blink*
Ok, so, I don't affiliate myself at all with the SW fandom but imadra_blue is on my flist and she recommended this so I thought I'd give it a try.
Lordy, this is great.
I have only a slight idea what canon for this fandom is but you hit the nail on the head with what I had in my mind.
The characterisation of both characters was brilliant imo, and the subtle humour thrown in for good measuer was brilliant.

Gah, Obi-Wan, gah.
You silly tosser, *shakes head*
Alas, internal struggle, wot.

You rock, just so you know.
\m/

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Ok, so, I don't affiliate myself at all with the SW fandom but imadra_blue is on my flist and she recommended this so I thought I'd give it a try.

I've only recently joined the SW fandom. I'd seen all the movies (the first three as the kid, the other two as they came out), but it was RotS that trigged my love.

Lordy, this is great.
I have only a slight idea what canon for this fandom is but you hit the nail on the head with what I had in my mind.

Thank you.

The characterisation of both characters was brilliant imo, and the subtle humour thrown in for good measuer was brilliant.

Gah, Obi-Wan, gah.
You silly tosser, *shakes head*
Alas, internal struggle, wot.

You rock, just so you know.

Hee, thank you. And yes, Obi-Wan is so silly, both here and in canon. It's kinda sad that he can only say that he loves Anakin after he's chopped his limbs off.

[handjob-susan.livejournal.com]

Holy shit you own. That's all I can say because I just died a little.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[emo-woman.livejournal.com]

*thud* *sniff*

I identify so much with Anakin for some reason.

Obi-Wan, you're a twit.

*sighs*

This was great work. Absolutely fab.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

I identify so much with Anakin for some reason.

Anakin really is a pretty sympathetic character in a lot of ways. A 'loved not wisely, but too well' kind of character, full of passion and love.

Obi-Wan, you're a twit.

*sighs with you*

Much as I adore him -- that is so true.

This was great work. Absolutely fab.

Thank you.

[catiadoodle.livejournal.com]

Here from imadra_blue.

Wow, this is such a great fic ! Your characterization of both Obi-Wan and Anakin is spot on.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is such a great fic ! Your characterization of both Obi-Wan and Anakin is spot on.

Thank you! I've fallen so hopelessly in love with them and their epic tragedy.

[moojja.livejournal.com]

Poor Obi-wan, trapped between who he is, and who he loves. As much as he loves Anakin, he can't give up being a Jedi, or at least the way he thinks a Jedi should be.

Anakin who wants it all, and end up with nothing.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

Poor Obi-wan, trapped between who he is, and who he loves. As much as he loves Anakin, he can't give up being a Jedi, or at least the way he thinks a Jedi should be.

Anakin who wants it all, and end up with nothing.

That pretty much sums it up perfectly.

Poor kids.

[scary-lullabies.livejournal.com]

Oh holy son of Mary on a tricuit, you win at the fandom. At life. Dear sweet gods, I love you.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

*blushes*

Thank you.

[walksbyherself]

EEE!

There aren't words to express how I feel about this story except for "thank you" and "love you." This was brilliant and just...GUH. So much love.

*hugs*,
~Kat

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much.

[elledwen.livejournal.com]

As everyone else has already said, that was truely amazing. Wow...I mean WOW! It was perfect, the characterization, the story....the heartbreaking-ness...ok, That's not a word. But, Oy vey! Wonderful!

-Elle

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Elle!

[cruelest-month.livejournal.com]

Found a link to this and wow... That was absolutely one of the loveliest fics I've ever read about the two of them. I...guh... *sniffles* Beautiful job.

[butterfly.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

They really do angst well together.