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Story Title: Chapter and Verse (1/6)
Series Title: part of the Realignment universe
Summary: The Doctor, Rose, and Donna stumble into a problem the Doctor thought he'd left in the past.
Pairing: Doctor/Rose
Rating: PG-13.
Warning: AU after Doctor Who 3x13 - "Last of the Time Lords".

Chapter and Verse


Rose Tyler seemed to have entered a determined silent war with the Doctor. Donna wasn't sure where Rose had decided she was located in all this, but she was concerned that her future in the TARDIS depended on what Rose thought. And if that were true, her prospects could look better. Rose didn't seem ready to bend even the slightest.

The Doctor, on the other hand, kept offering up eager suggestions to Rose about the particulars of their upcoming trip, changing them and adding more possibilities when he got no response from his audience. He would make a few adjustments to their flight path every time that he offered up a new idea, and the whole room would shake as their destination changed.

“We could go take Donna to see your statue,” the Doctor said. Donna shifted uncomfortably on the bench, wishing that the Doctor hadn't brought her name into this – Rose raised an eyebrow, leaning back against the TARDIS console. She seemed to know just where to rest to not be touching anything important but to be right in the Doctor's way as he bobbed and weaved around her like a buoy caught in a restless ocean. “Or... I could take you to meet Marc Antony! Very charismatic, if a bit violent. Still, less so around women. Well, women he doesn't know... or own... or fear.”

“Would you be spending time with Cleo while we were there?” Rose asked, examining her fingernails, nothing but sweetness in her voice. The Doctor, who could be bright on occasion, flinched at the question.

“And you always say that you don't know your history,” he said in a strained voice. He glanced over at Donna and then jerked his head to the side. Donna pursed her lips in confusion and then a light clicked – ah! He wanted her to leave, for a bit, so that he could talk to Rose alone. Because that had clearly gone so well last time. Donna mouthed 'maybe I can help' back and the Doctor squinted at her. Then he sighed and shrugged, as if to say, 'you probably can't hurt'. Donna rolled her eyes and resisted the urge to mouth back an annoyed 'thanks for the vote of confidence'.

“The thing that I've been wondering about is how we're going to get around in Rome,” Donna said, using a carrying voice. Rose looked over in her direction for the first time since the Doctor had come back into the room. Donna wondered if Rose had possessed that cuttingly polite icy stare the last time the Doctor had known her or if it was something she'd picked up in the place she'd been lost. Still, despite the lack of welcome, Donna rallied to her cause. “Because I can speak a little Latin, but nothing useful, not unless we're planning on coming, seeing, and conquering.”

“Oh, the TARDIS translates,” Rose said, the coldness in her melting around the edges. Talking about the ship seemed to be helping. Rose didn't just love the Doctor, then, she loved this too. That might be useful information when it came to Donna talking her way into a more permanent arrangement. Rose stroked her hand along a nearby panel, her eyes fond. “Inside your head. It's really rather brilliant.”

The Doctor beamed at Donna as if she'd hung the moon, so she decided to keep on and asked the question that immediately popped up in her mind.

“If it gets translated... what happens if I speak to them in actual, real Latin?”

“I've never thought about that,” Rose said, sounding intrigued and looking over at the Doctor expectantly. “Doctor?”

“I have no idea,” he said. Now, he didn't just look pleased, but impressed. She'd stumped the great Lord of Time, himself. Ha! Point to the human.

“Well, that's what I'm going to do,” Donna said, folding her arms in triumph. The flight had settled enough that she didn't need to brace herself for right now. “I'm going to talk to a Roman in Latin.”

“Oh, I see why he likes you,” Rose said, a warm smile on her face for the first time since the Doctor had brought up the subject of Donna travelling with them. “You're clever.”

“Does that mean...?” the Doctor asked, sounding, of all things, shy. Donna wasn't sure how he was managing to look up at Rose through his eyelashes, but it was fairly fascinating to watch. It was like watching a lynx roll over and beg for a belly rub.

“Yeah, it does,” Rose said, reaching out and tugging the Doctor into a hug. Rose buried her face in his shoulder, so that Donna could only see the fall of her hair against the Doctor's suit.

Well, that was... almost anti-climatic. On the one hand, it was nice that they apparently had the shortest fights in the world, but she'd expected something... bigger?

They certainly were taking their time about finishing up that hug.

Donna started to head over to the console, to see if she could figure anything more out from the monitor. It couldn't be in alien all the time.

“Oi!” the Doctor protested, pulling away from Rose and placing himself in front of Donna. He crossed his arms over his chest and had quite a stern look on his face. It didn't suit him. “Those are very delicate.”

“You hit them with a mallet,” Donna said, repressing, with some regret, the urge to smack him in the arm.

“I know what I'm doing,” the Doctor said, turning up his nose like a cat that'd been displaced from its favorite chair.

“I seem to recall a certain incident...” Rose teased, brushing up against the Doctor's arm. The Doctor's haughty expression melted like it had never existed.

“You wouldn't,” he breathed.

“What?” Donna asked. “What did he do?”

“Yes, Doctor, what did you do?” Rose asked, cheekily. “Or maybe she should be asking 'what did you admit to'?”

Donna glanced between the two of them, noticing the way the Doctor had angled his body toward Rose and the way that she was now brushing against his arm. Unfortunately for Donna's curiosity, Rose was clearly playing around with the Doctor and not planning on actually revealing anything he wouldn't want her to say.

“Don't make me regret bringing you on board,” the Doctor said to Rose, who grinned at him merrily.

“Should've stayed away the first time,” she said, her nose crinkling up. It was the most ridiculously adorable expression that Donna had ever seen and it really shouldn't have worked on someone Rose's age, yet she somehow pulled it off. “I could have been manager at Finches' butcher shop by now.”

“Ordering everyone around is your style,” he said, with a bit of a wink. “You'd be owner already.”

“Not to interrupt the endless flirting, but your ship is blinking at you,” Donna said, pointing at the monitor, where five symbols kept flashing on through the same order. How long, she wondered, would it have taken them to notice that without her around?

“What?” the Doctor said, turning back to the monitor and then cracking it a good one up the side. The monitor wobbled for a moment from the impact.

“Knows what he's doing. Bah,” Donna said, not bothering to be quiet.

“That's just... Oh! Well, if I compensate for the... but that shouldn't be around for a thousand years...” He was twisting dials and dashing around and running his mouth the entire time.

“Rome is nice,” Rose said, moving closer to where Donna had stopped. The Doctor, who had raced over to the other side of the platform, called out for Rose to do something that Donna couldn't even pronounce and Rose reached over and flipped a switch that looked like it was secured with string – the Doctor yelled a quick thanks. Rose didn't look away from Donna. “If he's the one that picked it, though, and you'd rather go somewhere else for your trip, just let me know and we'll change it.”

“Should we be worried?” Donna asked – the Doctor had pulled out a small hammer and smacked something with it, swearing. Rose glanced over, tilting her head, and then turned back to Donna with a tiny, one-shouldered shrug.

“Happens a lot,” she said. “It's actually... it's one of the good things, isn't it? Like a funfair ride. You might throw up, but the vertigo is worth it.”

“Never really liked thrill rides,” Donna admitted, reaching out to grab onto the side of the console for a handhold. “Wasn't all that thrilled with him, when we first met. He grows on you, though.”

“He does,” Rose said, a faint blush staining her cheeks.

“Rose, what's the gravitation pull chart saying?” the Doctor asked, slamming his fist down on something that Donna couldn't see. Rose threw Donna an apologetic look and then turned back to the monitor, twisting one of the knobs on the front.

“Three-sixteen-danish-custard,” Rose said, though Donna could only see odd swirly shapes. “Also, the hamburger is blue.”

“Right, thanks!” the Doctor said, rushing over to another section of the console.

“The hamburger is blue?” Donna asked, not able to help herself.

“Oh, no,” Rose said, with a bit of a giggle. “That was actually... that was Gallifreyan, the Doctor's language. Allseithaambergurissbluh. It means... something about Tuesdays on the left. It's hard to translate.”

“You can speak his language?”

“Not much of it,” Rose said, with a shrug and a distant look in her eyes. “He's teaching me in bits and pieces. That one, I actually learned... a while ago. I hadn't realized that I'd remembered it.”

“Back before... before he lost you,” Donna said, softly. She still didn't know the details, but Rose seemed just as skittish about the particulars as the Doctor, so she might not ever find out. “That's when he taught you that one, isn't it?”

“You knew about that?” Rose asked, throwing her a startled glance. “Why would he... how could that possibly have mattered?”

“Oh! This wasn't... this isn't the first time I've met the Doctor,” Donna said, eyes narrowing thoughtfully. That man talked and talked, but he never said anything. “He didn't say?”

“He's bad at remembering when people need to know things,” Rose said, but with good humor, Donna was happy to see. “When did you know him before?”

“Right after he'd lost you, I accidentally got pulled into the ship and he saved my life,” Donna said. She had to look away for a bit, because despite everything Lance had done to her, despite knowing that it had never been real, she still felt a pang of loss in her heart when she thought of the wedding she'd never had. “He... he was in a lot of pain. Really missed you. Your shirt was up on that railing, right over there. It was... purple or blue. Something like that.”

“Ah,” Rose said. Donna glanced back over at her and she was biting her lip, looking thoughtful. “Why do you keep saying 'lost'? I'm not a parcel for the post or a lipstick that's fallen behind the mirror.”

“That's what he said, when I asked where you were,” Donna said. “Lost.”

“But you try to find lost things,” Rose said, and the wistfulness in her voice grabbed onto something deep in Donna's stomach and twisted. Rose was looking over at the Doctor, who seemed nearly satisfied with what was going on with the ship. Maybe he'd finally stopped changing his mind about where he was going.

Maybe the Doctor wasn't the only person here who needed someone here to listen.

The ship came to a stop – Donna still had her bit of ship but Rose had to grab onto one of the many protrusions off of the main console to keep from falling. The Doctor gave out a shout of triumph.

“Want to take a look outside before we get changed?” Rose asked.

“What for?” Donna asked,.

“You haven't known the Doctor long enough to realize that he sometimes gets these things a bit wrong?” Rose asked, loudly enough that the Doctor must have heard her. He came around the console and snagged her by the waist, tugging her up against his body. He bent closer and whispered something in her ear. Donna rolled her eyes, turning away from them and going toward the door.

She could hear Rose laughing, briefly, before the sound was muffled. Donna took a quick peek around her shoulder and, yes, that was definitely kissing. Well, good for them.

She opened the door and stuck her head outside.

Countryside. Lots and lots of very unhelpful countryside, with the occasional speckling of trees.

Well, there was a dirt path a few feet away from where the TARDIS had landed, but it wasn't giving any clues. They certainly weren't in Rome, but they could just be outside the city. It was impossible to say.

She shut the door and looked back around – ah. Still kissing. The Doctor's hands were around Rose's waist and hers were in his hair. They seemed fairly involved in the moment.

Donna cleared her throat.

They kept on with it.

She tried again, more loudly.

It looked like one of Doctor's hands was drifting down toward Rose's arse. Right, she was all for love and such things but she was not going to watch the two of them shagging in front of her.

“So,” she said, lifting up her voice in a shout. “I can't tell where we are!”

They jumped apart like two dogs that had just had a firehose turned on them, both of them giving her very wounded looks. Donna rolled her eyes.

“It's just... grass out there,” she said, waving her hands. “We could be anywhere. We could be in Sweden!”

“Hmm,” the Doctor said, going over to his screen again. He made another questioning noise, pressing down on something that Donna couldn't quite see. “It says Rome... oh.”

“What does 'oh' mean?” Donna asked.

“Nothing good,” Rose said. She crowded against the Doctor's shoulder, making dissatisfied noises. “I can't read any of that.”

“That-” the Doctor said, extremely annoyed. “-would be my ship informing me that it would love to take me to Rome, after I deal with the power malfunction that hooked it into following a trace energy signature.”

“The TARDIS is blackmailing you?” Rose asked. Donna couldn't see her face, but she sounded vastly amused. “Is she at least telling you what we're looking for?”

“Don't encourage it, Rose,” the Doctor said, though none of Rose's enthusiasm seemed to be dampened. “There used to be stories of the rogue TARDIS, stealing away Time Lords and dumping them into eternal prisons of unbearable stench.”

“What, really?” Donna asked. The Doctor twisted around and grinned at her, looking like an idiot. “You just made that up!”

“Of course, I did,” the Doctor said, insufferably pleased with himself. “The closest that you'd ever get to a rogue TARDIS is well... hmm. Best not to get into that.”

“Get into what?” Donna asked.

“Any of it,” the Doctor said.

“Especially since you're only here for one trip,” Rose added, who seemed to know exactly what the Doctor was talking about.

“About that...” Donna started, then she glanced at the Doctor, who was looking rather dismayed. She sent him a look that said, very clearly, that she didn't plan on backing down as a rule, but only said to Rose, “I did want to see Rome.”

“You're right, of course,” Rose said, reaching up to touch her forehead. Her cheeks were slightly pink. Well, she should be embarrassed. “We'll take you there after whatever this is gets cleared up. Speaking of,” she turned back toward the Doctor, “Where do you suppose we landed?”

“Since it's not coming up on the monitors, we'll need to work it out the old-fashioned way. Countryside, you said? With grass and lanes and... wait, any fences, hold on, I'll just pull up...”

His monitor turned into a camera view of the outside and Donna nodded.

“Grass. Dirt road. That's all. For miles.”

Well, I don't know if you can actually see for miles from here. We're in a bit of a low point, not a true nadir, but still something of a geographical dip. That's going to have an affect on how far into the distance you can see - particularly humans such as yourself or Rose, who have weaker eyesight.”

"And what do your superior eyes tell you?" Donna snapped.

"There are some lovely, plentiful examples of Poaceae out there," the Doctor said, sounding quite scholarly, just briefly. Then he smiled again, revealing the odd, silly man who'd laughed with her about riding on a Segway. "Or, to rephrase, there's a lot of grass outside."

“It's not making think of Rome,” Rose said, tilting her head as she stared at the screen. “It's making me think of... I don't know. Scotland in the days of Queen Victoria, maybe. All that grass.”

“I wouldn't say Scotland, though it's Earth, without a doubt. The countryside is making me lean toward... England,” the Doctor said, tilting his head. “Based on the lack of development, clear skies, that bit of road right there, and – oo! see those trees! – I would say before your Industrial Revolution but only by a century or two. I believe that we're near an estate... Which makes me think that we should look into basic Elizabethan-era dresses for you and Donna.”

“You got all that from grass and a bit of road?” Donna asked, staring hard at the screen.

“Don't forget the trees,” the Doctor said. “Elizabethan... I wonder if something went wrong during...” his words drifted off, his hand scrubbing at the back of his neck. “Actually... I wonder if... right. I'll be back!”

And he was off, racing away – Rose took right off, too, both of them pelting down a corridor. Donna, not about to be left out, followed after them.

Blimey, she understood what Sarah Jane had said earlier about this place being enormous. They went up a staircase and down a hall and went left and right and double-back and it was exhausting. Finally, they fetched up in what look like a dark, forgotten room. No dust, though, and the Doctor seemed to be looking for something in particular.

He knelt down and came up with a round, glass ball with a heavy crack taken out of it – there were chips all along the side of the crack, but on the inside, and the ball seemed to be filled with an odd purple dust.

“They got out,” he said, turning the ball over in his hands and pressing down on a place where the crack was large enough that some of the dust inside could have sprinkled out onto the floor. “That surge of power... the way the TARDIS has been acting ever since... there's always a cost. Always. You were allowed to stay, but she let out...”

“Doctor, what are you on about?” Rose asked, crouching down next to him and reaching out for his arm. He immediately and completely focused on Rose, so quickly and thoroughly that it send a strange chill up Donna's spine. “The cost for what?”

“When I was travelling with Martha, I encountered a species known as the Carrionites,” he said, gesturing with the glass sphere. “They were attempting to use Shakespeare's words to re-enter this world and take it over. The results would have been disastrous, but we were able to trap them into this vessel.”

He closed his eyes. Donna put her hand on his shoulder, wishing that she knew the right words to say.

“How did they get out?” Rose asked.

“When Martha accessed the Time Vortex, there was a surge of power that raced through the systems of the TARDIS,” the Doctor said. “Just as you didn't have full control over what you were doing with Jack, she was pulling power from places that she didn't control... she sapped away the energy that was sealing them inside, just enough that they were able to crack their way out and they headed here. Back to the place where they'd nearly succeeded before. Elizabethan England.”

“Well,” said Donna, adding 'Time Vortex' to the list of things she was asking the Doctor about the next time she got him alone. “At least we know why we're here.”




Coming soon: part two.

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Date: 2009-02-04 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinyopals.livejournal.com
Oooh... shiny so far. And the Carrionites again? This should be interesting. I'm beginning to think this may have something to do with Queen Elizabeth being so pissed off to see him?

Anyway, the interaction between the three of them was lovely. I think it's good that Rose had a chance to talk to Donna about what things were like.

Looking forward to more!

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:20 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you!


Anyway, the interaction between the three of them was lovely. I think it's good that Rose had a chance to talk to Donna about what things were like.


I wish that we could have gotten more interaction between them in canon. Because they are all awesome and like each other. It would have been so much fun!

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Date: 2009-02-04 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sumeria.livejournal.com
Yay! More of this fic! ::happy dance::

And ooh, Carionites. I love Carionites. This is shaping up to be absolutely delightful.

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you! I hope you enjoy what I do with them.

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Date: 2009-02-04 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] debs7.livejournal.com
oh yaya more of this universe! I admit to regularly checking your LJ to see if if I've missed anything.

Can't wait for more.

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! That's so nice to hear.

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Date: 2009-02-05 07:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rynne.livejournal.com
omg more of this universe yay! *flails in glee* And I have time to give you a proper comment! *more glee!* :D

“Does that mean...?” the Doctor asked, sounding, of all things, shy. Donna wasn't sure how he was managing to look up at Rose through his eyelashes, but it was fairly fascinating to watch. It was like watching a lynx roll over and beg for a belly rub.

Oh, that's adorable. I really like that imagery. A dangerous predator willingly submitting himself--which is, of course, exactly what the Doctor is. And him being shy, and doing something as ingenuous as looking up at her through his eyelashes--to me, it sort of evokes the idea that despite him being a dangerous predator, he's not dangerous to her. There's a willing component to that, but also the feeling that that's just the way things are, with them. Stereotypically it's the woman who sounds shy and acts ingenuous, but Rose really does have the most power in their personal relationship. It's a fascinating aspect of the Doctor's character, one I always enjoy seeing in fic, so this was nice and subtle and lovely.

Well, that was... almost anti-climatic. On the one hand, it was nice that they apparently had the shortest fights in the world, but she'd expected something... bigger?

Hah. Remembering Jack's reaction to the big fight in Universal Realignment, I think Donna should be glad for an anti-climax! But it's part of what I love about fights between these two. Well, sorta--conflict makes me wibble so I pretty much instinctively wince whenever I read/watch characters fighting, but what I love about the way the Doctor and Rose fight is that it can get ugly and horrible and hurtful (as is what happens when two people understand each other well enough to hit weak points), but they get to the heart of the issue remarkably quickly, and then do their best to resolve it. Sometimes it's the Doctor being the conciliatory one, like in Father's Day, and sometimes it's Rose, like here--but in fights, as in everything else, they are partners. You're so very good at getting to the essense of that.

Donna glanced between the two of them, noticing the way the Doctor had angled his body toward Rose and the way that she was now brushing against his arm. Unfortunately for Donna's curiosity, Rose was clearly playing around with the Doctor and not planning on actually revealing anything he wouldn't want her to say.

Very typical--they go off in their own little world at the drop of a hat, really. I think it's adorable, but I can't imagine Donna putting up with it for very long. But she's such a strong personality that I have every confidence in her ability to bring the Doctor and Rose back to Earth (so to speak) whenever they get too focused on each other for too long. I'm rather looking forward to that, really. ;)

“Three-sixteen-danish-custard,” Rose said, though Donna could only see odd swirly shapes. “Also, the hamburger is blue.”

Danish-custard? *amused* And I continue to be amused at how you picked a Gallifreyan word that ended up sounding like something that technically works in English but is literally nonsensical. Sort of something I could see the show doing, if it ever gave us spoken Gallifreyan--complete with the Doctor's look of bemused condescension when his companion made Donna's mistake. :p

I rambled enough that I need two comments, so...

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:27 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
omg more of this universe yay! *flails in glee* And I have time to give you a proper comment! *more glee!* :D

Thank you! It's a lovely, long comment. I appreciate it a lot.

Oh, that's adorable. I really like that imagery. A dangerous predator willingly submitting himself--which is, of course, exactly what the Doctor is. And him being shy, and doing something as ingenuous as looking up at her through his eyelashes--to me, it sort of evokes the idea that despite him being a dangerous predator, he's not dangerous to her. There's a willing component to that, but also the feeling that that's just the way things are, with them. Stereotypically it's the woman who sounds shy and acts ingenuous, but Rose really does have the most power in their personal relationship. It's a fascinating aspect of the Doctor's character, one I always enjoy seeing in fic, so this was nice and subtle and lovely.

It's something that I really adore about their relationship, that reversal of what the stereotypes would tell you to expect.

Sometimes it's the Doctor being the conciliatory one, like in Father's Day, and sometimes it's Rose, like here--but in fights, as in everything else, they are partners. You're so very good at getting to the essense of that.

Thanks. That really is (again) a part of their relationship that I really enjoy in canon.

Very typical--they go off in their own little world at the drop of a hat, really. I think it's adorable, but I can't imagine Donna putting up with it for very long. But she's such a strong personality that I have every confidence in her ability to bring the Doctor and Rose back to Earth (so to speak) whenever they get too focused on each other for too long. I'm rather looking forward to that, really. ;)

Definitely. Donna is very strong-willed and not able to put up with being ignored.

Danish-custard? *amused* And I continue to be amused at how you picked a Gallifreyan word that ended up sounding like something that technically works in English but is literally nonsensical. Sort of something I could see the show doing, if it ever gave us spoken Gallifreyan--complete with the Doctor's look of bemused condescension when his companion made Donna's mistake. :p

Hee. Yes. That was fun to write.

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Date: 2009-02-05 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rynne.livejournal.com
Part two!

“But you try to find lost things,” Rose said, and the wistfulness in her voice grabbed onto something deep in Donna's stomach and twisted.

Yes. I mean, I came into fandom knowing that Rose would be coming back, and I did figure that it'd be her finding the Doctor, not the other way around. That's just who they are. But I always loved reunionfic where the Doctor is the one who finds a way over, because I wanted him to stop being willing to settle for being miserable. Obviously, I did not understand RTD very well. *is not bitter at all, nooo*

But still, yes. I think one of the reasons Bad Wolf Bay hurt Rose so much is that she knew when the Doctor said "impossible", it meant he wouldn't even try anymore. Of course she would still be determined to get back to him, but it would hurt, that he would not longer be willing to make that effort. Even now when Rose knows how much she means to him, enough that he'd choose her over the whole universe, I think that would still hurt. And not just for her own sake, but for his, that he wasn't willing to fight for his own happiness.

Maybe the Doctor wasn't the only person here who needed someone here to listen.

YES. Rose and the Doctor definitely love each other and are better together than apart, but they still need to have friends, a support system, outside of each other. Jack and Martha, Sarah Jane if they ever start letting her in the loop, and now Donna--they're so good for them. And especially now that Rose no longer has Jackie, I think it'll do her good to have an older female friend to talk to.

“You haven't known the Doctor long enough to realize that he sometimes gets these things a bit wrong?” Rose asked, loudly enough that the Doctor must have heard her. He came around the console and snagged her by the waist, tugging her up against his body. He bent closer and whispered something in her ear. Donna rolled her eyes, turning away from them and going toward the door.

She could hear Rose laughing, briefly, before the sound was muffled. Donna took a quick peek around her shoulder and, yes, that was definitely kissing. Well, good for them.


First, I love them being so free with each other. It happies me very much. :D But also, heh, I bet the Doctor is happy to finally have this to respond with when Rose embarks on one of her ego-puncturing trips. :p Of course the ego-puncturing is good for him, but I imagine he's very pleased with himself. *g*

“Well, I don't know if you can actually see for miles from here. We're in a bit of a low point, not a true nadir, but still something of a geographical dip. That's going to have an affect on how far into the distance you can see - particularly humans such as yourself or Rose, who have weaker eyesight.”

"And what do your superior eyes tell you?" Donna snapped.


I'm glad Donna's not putting up with that. It reminds me of his comment on human senses in Two Coins, Silver, and its effect on Rose. It may be true, but it's not sensitive and it's not helpful. The Doctor determining that rudeness is part of his personality does not give him carte blanche to say things like that, and while I'm sure Rose would have called him on it eventually, I'm glad Donna's not putting up with it from the start. I think next time he pulls out his specs, she should make a comment on his superior eyesight. :p

And finally, yay Carrionites! The Shakespeare Code is one of my favorite episodes, and I'd really rather like to see another confrontation between Lilith and the Doctor.

*cough* So, here's the ginormous comment that I like to do when I have time--and when fics inspire me. I ramble in comments when I can, because I love fics that make me think so much with just a line or two, and want to talk about it.

I'm really looking forward to the next part of this--and the Doctor or Rose's POV? I love Donna, and I love reading things from her perspective, but I'd really like to see the Doctor's and Rose's takes on recent events soon too. :)

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
But still, yes. I think one of the reasons Bad Wolf Bay hurt Rose so much is that she knew when the Doctor said "impossible", it meant he wouldn't even try anymore. Of course she would still be determined to get back to him, but it would hurt, that he would not longer be willing to make that effort. Even now when Rose knows how much she means to him, enough that he'd choose her over the whole universe, I think that would still hurt. And not just for her own sake, but for his, that he wasn't willing to fight for his own happiness.

Exactly. Even with what she's learned since about exactly how much it hurt him, he wasn't going to do anything about it.

YES. Rose and the Doctor definitely love each other and are better together than apart, but they still need to have friends, a support system, outside of each other. Jack and Martha, Sarah Jane if they ever start letting her in the loop, and now Donna--they're so good for them. And especially now that Rose no longer has Jackie, I think it'll do her good to have an older female friend to talk to.

Yes. Not having Jackie in Rose's life was something that I've been torn about at times (also, not having Mickey was hard). Having that support system really is key, so I really enjoyed having Sarah Jane and Jack around in the last fic. I don't have to worry about arranging schedules or budgeting for actors, which is one of the benefits written fiction has over audiovisual.

First, I love them being so free with each other. It happies me very much. :D But also, heh, I bet the Doctor is happy to finally have this to respond with when Rose embarks on one of her ego-puncturing trips. :p Of course the ego-puncturing is good for him, but I imagine he's very pleased with himself. *g*

Yes. Getting to write the two of them kissing and being casually romantic is a lot of fun.

And finally, yay Carrionites! The Shakespeare Code is one of my favorite episodes, and I'd really rather like to see another confrontation between Lilith and the Doctor.

They have a lot that they could talk about, especially with Lilith seeing Rose's name in the Doctor's head in TSC.

I'm really looking forward to the next part of this--and the Doctor or Rose's POV? I love Donna, and I love reading things from her perspective, but I'd really like to see the Doctor's and Rose's takes on recent events soon too. :)

It's Rose PoV for the next chapter!

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Date: 2009-02-05 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helygen.livejournal.com
Oooh what a cracking start! Your voices are perfect :)

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2009-02-06 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silviakundera.livejournal.com
oh, exciting exciting! Donna is both loud and crafy, and Rose/Doctor makes me all soft and squishy inside.

Can hardly wait for part 2. :)

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Date: 2009-02-06 07:41 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

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Date: 2009-03-16 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyaaaaaauuuuuuu.livejournal.com
ooh, i quite love this 'verse. especially the tensions and by-play among characters. you write them all so well. ;)

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Date: 2009-03-17 04:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

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Date: 2009-03-18 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girl-type.livejournal.com
I really enjoy your writing. I've been reading this entire series that you have here when I should totally be working on my thesis ... come to think of it you might be the devil. I've never been very good about denying temptation.

Were I Rose, I think my biggest issue with the whole inviting-Donna-along-thing would be the fact that he invited her onto a ship that's supposed to be their home without asking her. There would be no way I would just happily accept some guy I was with just inviting some woman i don't even know to come live with us. which is pretty much what the doctor did. Not to mention the part where they can't seem to get a moment alone together to get to the sexin' part when they're traveling alone. It's not gonna be any easier with someone else on board (the Tardis being so big actually isn't going to help much in that capacity).

I very badly want to see what she said to him earlier. (i'm nosy like that).

anyways, this has been a great read. I hope to see more.

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Date: 2009-03-23 02:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Were I Rose, I think my biggest issue with the whole inviting-Donna-along-thing would be the fact that he invited her onto a ship that's supposed to be their home without asking her. There would be no way I would just happily accept some guy I was with just inviting some woman i don't even know to come live with us. which is pretty much what the doctor did.

Yes. She would like input into the decisions that will affect her life. She didn't know Donna and just because the Doctor assumes things will work out is no reason for her to immediately go, "Okay!"

Not to mention the part where they can't seem to get a moment alone together to get to the sexin' part when they're traveling alone. It's not gonna be any easier with someone else on board (the Tardis being so big actually isn't going to help much in that capacity).

That's definitely an element of her frustration, yes.

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Date: 2009-03-19 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rosie-not-rose.livejournal.com
I've just read all the stories in this series - so good! I hope there's more to come. =D

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Date: 2009-03-23 02:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the series.

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Date: 2009-04-08 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binah1013.livejournal.com
I'm enjoying this series immensely. Can't wait to see how this adventure with Donna turns out and what's up with Holly Cole. I'm also curious to see how the Doctor and Rose will finally share sexual intimacy (as he puts it).

MOAR PLZ!

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Date: 2009-04-09 10:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Hopefully, you'll be able to read the next part soon.

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