Fanficcy thoughts
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butterflyI've written a J/L snippet. It's the first thing that I've ever written in this fandom. I may eventually write a real story.
J/L snippet:
Second Glance('Cause everything must be titled)
When Justin looked at Lance, he forced himself to forget the inner image that he had always had of Lance in his mind, he let himself see past his memory of that pale, effeminate boy and look at the reality facing him.
Lance's hair, messily spiked, looked soft to the touch and he found himself longing to feel its softness against his palm, longing to go closer. His gaze lowered, settling on Lance's eyes. They no longer held any trace of hesitation or uncertainty. Instead, they were clear and open, the pale green irises almost invisible with the dilation of his pupils.
His eyes lowered again, to focus on Lance's slightly open mouth. He could hear Lance softly breathing, and his own eyes widened when he saw a pink tongue dart out and moisten Lance's inviting mouth. He could hear his own breathing quicken and pulled his gaze down further.
He licked his lips as he stared at the tight muscles of Lance's stomach. Before his eyes could wander any further, he heard a low chuckle from Lance. He forced his gaze up, meeting Lance's own. Lance's eyebrow quirked and he longed to lick the arched line, longed to taste every inch of Lance's body.
J/L snippet:
Second Glance('Cause everything must be titled)
When Justin looked at Lance, he forced himself to forget the inner image that he had always had of Lance in his mind, he let himself see past his memory of that pale, effeminate boy and look at the reality facing him.
Lance's hair, messily spiked, looked soft to the touch and he found himself longing to feel its softness against his palm, longing to go closer. His gaze lowered, settling on Lance's eyes. They no longer held any trace of hesitation or uncertainty. Instead, they were clear and open, the pale green irises almost invisible with the dilation of his pupils.
His eyes lowered again, to focus on Lance's slightly open mouth. He could hear Lance softly breathing, and his own eyes widened when he saw a pink tongue dart out and moisten Lance's inviting mouth. He could hear his own breathing quicken and pulled his gaze down further.
He licked his lips as he stared at the tight muscles of Lance's stomach. Before his eyes could wander any further, he heard a low chuckle from Lance. He forced his gaze up, meeting Lance's own. Lance's eyebrow quirked and he longed to lick the arched line, longed to taste every inch of Lance's body.
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Re: I Like It!
Date: 2001-08-14 10:09 pm (UTC)Thanks again for your kind words.