Last burst of the lemming for tonight.

[butterfly]

Femslash:
Barbie
I didn't plan any of this.
Total sum-up of the feeling of the fic. She isn't in control and doesn't know what she's doing. I like it.

Fading
It wouldn't be too much longer now.
Eh, it raises some questions, but it's mostly boring.

A Possibility
There are nights when she stares at the slim razor that she carries with her and wishes that she had the guts to make marks.
Brutal and straight out there. I love this line. It's what inspired the fic. I might shorten it a little, though. Hmm. The impact is good, though.

Forsaken
The dim light in the room made her reflection hard to see, but Britney didn't want to turn the lights up.
Covers both of the main themes, reflections and hopelessness. I like it.

Rhythm
She can always feel it.
I like it. It explains without explaining at all.

Pop Tart
Everyone likes her.
Bleh. Boring. Man, I need to rewrite these things.

Light My Way
I looked away quickly, not wanting the girl to catch me staring.
I like it. It could be cleaner, though.

No Rainchecks
Britney could be such a bitch sometimes.
Heh. This line just makes me giggle, I must admit.

And now, first lines from some of my unfinished fic.

My Obssession: Every time that she sees them together, she breaks a little bit more inside.
Hmm. I like it. It'll probably change a little before I'm done with the fic, though.

To the Bones: It's not about love.
Another of those 'summary' first lines.

Burn: It's not going to end like this.
Eh. It needs work, I think.