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Warning: Incest overtones, though nothing terribly strong.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Farad'n/Ghanima; Leto/Ghanima
Summary: Leto and Ghanima's wedding.
Notes: Wedding is book canon that isn't mentioned in the miniseries. I'm using the ages for the twins from the miniseries.

Politics


The wedding ceremony for the Atreides twins was lavish, fitting for an Emperor and his consort. Everything was beautiful and everyone was... well, actually, no one seemed to be particularly happy about the wedding.

Farad'n glanced over at Ghanima and corrected himself. No one but the twins seemed pleased about the wedding.

Ghanima had taken him aside earlier to explain everything, but he still didn't really understand. Didn't want to understand.

She would have his children, but they were to have the Atreides name and he would never be allowed to claim them for his own. And tonight... tonight would be her wedding night alone and he would not share her bed.

And though he would go to her bed a virgin, she would not come to his as one.

At the end of the ceremony, Leto kissed Ghanima lightly on the lips. Her smile was brighter than the Arrakis sun.

And Farad'n knew himself to be a fool for falling in love with her.

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Date: 2003-04-07 11:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jic
I am unreasonably pleased by this.

Nice touch with the ouchy.

*grins*

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Date: 2003-04-08 01:14 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Glad that you liked it. Thanks for the feedback.

And yeah, I actually really started to like Farad'n after a while. He's cool. Bookish. Nice. Like a pet dog.

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Date: 2003-04-08 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corngirl-jo.livejournal.com
Lovin' it. Especially the Farad'n POV approach. Incest never been sexier.

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Date: 2003-04-08 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyjedi.livejournal.com
You did a great job with this. First Dune!fic I've ever read, too. I'm glad it was this one.

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Date: 2003-04-08 01:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I suddenly feel encouraged to write more.

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Date: 2003-04-08 01:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you. It was a lot of fun to write, actually.

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Date: 2003-04-08 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corngirl-jo.livejournal.com
I suddenly feel encouraged to write more.

Like a full-fledged fic, I hope you mean :-) Go, go!

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Date: 2003-04-08 04:20 pm (UTC)
jic: Daniel Jackson (SG1) firing weapon, caption "skill to do comes of doing" (Default)
From: [personal profile] jic
You know, "Pet" is just what I think when I think about him. Heh heh.

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