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'Neither SG-1 or Stargate Command will never be the same when a new member joins the team.'
(their sentence about season nine -- emphasis mine)

Sorry, what? That's not only a double negative, it's also just plain bad writing. Question -- is it worth it to write into Gateworld and mention something like that?

Alternatives that make more sense:
SG-1 and Stargate Command will never be the same after a new member joins the team.

Neither SG-1 nor Stargate Command will ever be the same after a new member joins the team.

After a new member joins the team, SG-1 and Stargate Command will never be the same.

A new member joins the team; SG-1 and Stargate Command will never be the same.

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Date: 2005-01-09 06:44 am (UTC)
luminosity: (Default)
From: [personal profile] luminosity
So. The team's getting a new member then? And things are gonna change?

:)

*grins back*

Date: 2005-01-10 04:32 am (UTC)
ext_1774: butterfly against blue background (Default)
From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Dude? Did you just say that they're getting a new member on the team? Where did you hear such shocking news?

I'm more surprised than I was when I heard that Buffy was coming back to life in S6 of BtVS. Or when I heard that Spike was going to be on the S5 box of Angel dvds. You shouldn't spring such surprising news on a person. What if I had a weak heart?

Wow. I wonder if things'll change. What with a new team member and all.

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