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For [livejournal.com profile] saffronhouse.

Title: Milo and Otis
Rating: PG
Summary: After Lockdown, Teal'c has his apartment warming.

Requests: Earth-based story. Nice smile from Teal'c.
Restrictions: No killing of the guys.

Milo and Otis


“Don’t say anything about the gold tattoo,” Sam continued, shooting little glances back at Pete, unable to keep from shifting from foot to foot. “And please don’t even so much as go near politics – the General and Daniel perfected the art of arguing a subject to death. And whatever you do, don’t get in the middle; they only look like they disagree.”

“Honey, you’re driving yourself crazy,” Pete said gently, reaching out to place a hand on her back, hoping that some of his calm would transfer over. “I doubt that they’re going to skin me alive and have me for the main course. You don’t need to be so jumpy.”

Sam sighed heavily, reaching out to knock on the apartment door. “You only say that because you don’t know them like I do.”

Which was only true – Samantha had spent years with this group of people. He’d met them a grand total of twice, and one of those times he’d been too busy being injured to notice anyone but Sam and the freaky chick with the laser hand. So, while he knew that Sam got nervous, he figured that caution was still the watchword of the day.

The door was opened almost as soon as Sam took her knuckles off the door.

Teal’c took up most of the doorway, a boulder of a man. And Pete was reminded that this was no gentle giant – Teal’c held himself like a soldier, the way Sam did. For a moment, his face was stone, eyes searching and clear, then the stone just seemed to melt away. His eyes sparkled, a warm smile crossing his lips as he inclined his head ever so slightly towards Sam and Pete.

“Colonel Carter, I am most pleased that you came to my apartment warming.” His voice was deep and rich – he sounded decades older than he looked. “And it is an honor to see you again, Pete Shanahan.”

“Likewise, sir,” Pete said, only barely remembering not to extend his hand – Sam’s list of instructions had been long and, to be honest, more than a little boring.

“Yeah, we’re all thrilled.” A rough voice interrupted from behind Teal’c. “Now get your asses in here so that we can stop heating the hallway.”

Teal’c stepped backward, formally motioning for them to enter and finally revealing the layout to the apartment. It was still very bare, clearly newly moved-into, and there was nothing up that seemed to reveal anything of the owner, apart from half a dozen red candles scattered about at various heights and a lush, green fern on an endtable.

And the two guys who were casually taking up what seemed to be most of the room.

Daniel Jackson, most often just ‘Daniel’ to Sam, was lying down on a couch that took up most of the side of the room.

Jack O’Neill was leaning against the wall, and Pete could only see his profile. Pete could vaguely remember him as the man who’d had Pete sign that confidentiality agreement and who’d escorted him out of Cheyenne Mountain the instant that their doctor had cleared him to leave. He'd still been a bit off his game. And, of course, O'Neill was the man who was ‘the General’ to Sam, said in many ways, but always with an undertone of respect and affection.

O’Neill’s attention wavered away from Pete and Sam after a quick wave hello and was focused back on Jackson, who seemed to be in the middle of some sort of lecture, complete with extensive arm motions.

“But sometimes, you have to trust yourself,” Jackson said, and he appeared to be wrapping up. “You have to believe in your instincts.”

“Your instincts used to lead you to beige and brown,” O’Neill commented, shooting an unreadable look at Jackson. “I was… we were all embarrassed to be seen in public with you. Right, Carter?”

“Yes, sir,” Sam said, pulling off her coat and joining the conversation without seeming to need a moment to find her place. Yeah, she knew these guys pretty well. “Though I still have a fond spot in my heart for the blue plaid.”

“Yes, back when I was a tweedy academic, I dressed the part,” Jackson said, his gaze shifting over toward Sam. “But I’ve grown as a person since then and I’ve discovered solid colors.”

Though Jackson’s voice had an edge of a whine to it, his eyes behind his glasses were warm and happy.

"Solid colors don't make you look any less like a geek with the shirts that you pick out,” O’Neill said. "Genius, schmius, you still have no clue how to dress yourself."

Jackson raised his eyebrows, his attention immediately shifting back towards O’Neill. "Well, Jack, since you're such a paragon of good taste, maybe you'd like to do my shopping for me from now on. I'd hate to see you go blind."

"I didn't say anything about the colors being too bright," O'Neill said breezily, waving a hand. "So, I'm not so worried about going blind."

"Oh, you should be," Jackson said, a hint of a threat in his voice, but nothing but softness in his eyes.

They fight like cats and dogs, Sam had warned him, but that wasn’t right at all. One of the things that he’d learned over the years was that it never paid to simply believe someone else, even someone he loved and trusted. And while Samantha might be a trained military officer and a scientist, she wasn’t a cop. And his instincts were telling him that there was something else at play here.

Every barb was softened with a teasing glance and there was no anger sharpening their words.

No, Jackson and O’Neill didn’t argue like adversaries, they argued in the way that implied that they knew that they’d be arguing together for a very long time.

Pete had long since accepted that there were things that Sam absolutely couldn’t tell him. Anything directly involving National Security, of course. Current activities of the program, definitely. Her CO being involved with a civilian under his command would also fit in the ‘No Tell’ list.

Well, that was assuming that Sam knew in the first place, though she never talked around O’Neill and Jackson the way she did the Stargate stuff, never seemed at all on edge or twitchy about the way their relationship came off. They were friends, they argued, end of story.

A less observant man, or maybe just a less suspicious one, might buy that. But there was a fine line between friends and friends, and something told him that these two had crossed that line a long time ago.

That sick feeling he’d been having about whether or not to ask Sam to marry him was fading away. Because he knew that Sam loved O’Neill, just from the way she said his title, but it was probably... had to be simple companionship and affection. Brothers in arms, comrades of war, and all that jazz that soldiers had together.

Still, though the warning in his brain dimmed, it didn’t go out completely. Because it was always possible that Sam didn’t know, that she did love O’Neill. That his bad feelings would prove to be true in the end.

But there she was, flitting into the conversation and inserting a soft comment and then pulling back over to side next to him, leaving the guys to continue the conversation on their own.

And continue they did – O’Neill was leaning forward in the chair, meeting Jackson’s eyes as he said something too quiet for Pete to catch. Whatever it was brought a young, almost boyish smile to Jackson’s face. No, Pete decided, there wasn’t a chance in hell that Sam could miss the light in Jackson’s eyes when he smiled at O’Neill.

Pete had nothing to worry about.

Pete grinned at Sam, bundling his insecurities deep down where they belonged, just letting himself enjoy the moment. She’d introduced him to her friends, she’d convinced her bosses to continue trust him with one of the biggest secrets that he could ever imagine knowing. She loved him.

He was a hell of a lucky guy.

~end~

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Date: 2005-06-01 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gategrrl.livejournal.com
Ouch. I mean, this is great, but OUCH! Knowing what's coming for Pete, and seeing that he sees it, is not sure SHE does...hmmm. OUCH!

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Date: 2005-06-02 03:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thanks.

I was remembering Pete saying in Threads how he hadn't been sure, but then she'd said 'yes', so he'd just hoped. And I think that he just loved her so much that he really wanted to believe she loved him back as much. Which always breaks my heart.

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Date: 2005-06-02 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gategrrl.livejournal.com
The more I think on it, the more spot on I think the characterization is in this story. She's blinded by whatever Pete thinks he sees her feeling...but he's NOT. He's NOT an idiot, like she seems to think he is (at least in Threads, that is). And then having him not tell her what she sees, cuz he thinks she MUST know...but he doesn't realize how blind she is to herself and Jack and Daniel.

This story clicks.

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Date: 2005-06-02 11:08 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you! That is just wonderful to hear.

I just remembering so horrible for Pete during Threads, especially when Sam isn't happy with how he reacts to her news. What was she expecting?

And Sam often doesn't see Jack clearly. Particularly when it comes to Daniel. Again, I think of Threads and how she tried pushing him to declare Daniel dead (but also her pushing him to show his feelings about Daniel's death in Revelations). Sam doesn't 'get' Jack, on an emotional level.

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Date: 2005-06-01 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raedbard.livejournal.com
Aww, Pete pov - I love that. If only it had turned out the way his hunches told him it would. :)

This is great. I liked seeing Daniel and Jack through someone else's point of view and particularly someone who isn't Sam or Teal'c. And wow, such great dialogue!

"Well, Jack, since you're such a paragon of good taste, maybe you'd like to do my shopping for me from now on. I'd hate to see you go blind."

"I didn't say anything about the colors being too bright," O'Neill said breezily, waving a hand. "So, I'm not so worried about going blind."

They're just perfect.

Oh, and the Teal'c smile. That was also of the love :)

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Date: 2005-06-02 03:59 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Aww, Pete pov - I love that. If only it had turned out the way his hunches told him it would. :)

And I hadn't planned that. I just started writing and, huh, Pete was the one on the screen.

I liked seeing Daniel and Jack through someone else's point of view and particularly someone who isn't Sam or Teal'c.

I always find it interesting to wonder about what the people around them think. Because they have had a lot of questionable interaction over the years.

And wow, such great dialogue!

Yay! Thank you. I do love the guys, so I'm glad that they sounded right.

Oh, and the Teal'c smile. That was also of the love

The smile is what helped me decide to place it in eighth season, as he smiles much more that season.

Again, thank you so much!

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Date: 2005-06-01 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saffronhouse.livejournal.com
Yay!

And thank you so much. You read my mind. This is *wonderful.* Jack and Daniel through someone else's eyes is one of my favorite tropes, and you do such a lovely job here. Plus, I've been dying to see poor Teal'c's housewarming. (The fern was a great touch)

“But I’ve grown as a person since then and I’ve discovered solid colors.”

Hee hee hee. Aw, geez. Thanks again for the story. You've made me very, very happy.

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Date: 2005-06-02 04:05 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Eeee! You liked it! I'm so thrilled!

And thank you so much. You read my mind. This is *wonderful.* Jack and Daniel through someone else's eyes is one of my favorite tropes, and you do such a lovely job here.

Thank you. I do always wonder what the people around them think. They're such intimate arguers, you know? The world disappears.

Plus, I've been dying to see poor Teal'c's housewarming. (The fern was a great touch)

I am ever so glad that I could help (I loved putting the fern from Affinity in, and it makes sense as a housewarming gift).

Hee hee hee. Aw, geez. Thanks again for the story. You've made me very, very happy.

Yay! You are a million shades of welcome. I'm so happy that you're happy with it!

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Date: 2005-06-01 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snoopygirll.livejournal.com
Excellent! I enjoyed this very much. Pete's POV, great approach, I love that, love what he sees too and the fact that he DOES see what's going on, which of course is highly believable because he's a detective and all.

Very classy of you to leave us guessing about Sam's awareness of Jack and Daniel's relationship too.

Then there's Jack and Daniel's relationship. Guh! So subtle and brilliantly done with looks and innuendo...

"Oh, you should be," Jackson said, a hint of a threat in his voice, but nothing but softness in his eyes.

Mmm, yummy.

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Date: 2005-06-02 04:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Excellent! I enjoyed this very much. Pete's POV, great approach, I love that, love what he sees too and the fact that he DOES see what's going on, which of course is highly believable because he's a detective and all.

Thank you! And yeah, I have such respect for cops (born of my due South love), so I liked being able to have him be all... perceptive.

Very classy of you to leave us guessing about Sam's awareness of Jack and Daniel's relationship too.

Hee. Thanks.

Then there's Jack and Daniel's relationship. Guh! So subtle and brilliantly done with looks and innuendo...

Aw, thank you. It's fun, writing outside their intense feelings, just taking the surface and looking at it.

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Date: 2005-06-02 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com
Aaaaaaaaah! I love it!! More! Pete get's a clue! Carter still has NO clue! Loved it!!!! More!! :) :) :) <- Can you tell I liked it? :)

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Date: 2005-06-02 11:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Hee. Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it.

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Date: 2005-06-02 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com
I like the way you've got Pete describing Jack and Daniel's relationship: they argued in the way that implied that they knew that they’d be arguing together for a very long time.

Thanks for the "outsider's" view in.

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Date: 2005-06-02 11:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you. And that line is one of the first that I wrote, so it's nice to hear that it resonates.

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Date: 2005-06-02 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skipmcgee.livejournal.com
I love 3rd person POVs, and this was exactly what I'd want out of a Pete POV. Thanks so much for sharing, and go [livejournal.com profile] saffronhouse for requesting it :)

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Date: 2005-06-02 11:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I actually really enjoyed writing Pete (it's the cop thing -- I was so completely attracted to Pete in Affinity when he was doing the cop thing).

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Date: 2005-06-02 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skipmcgee.livejournal.com
Ooo, maybe we'll hear more then from him :wink wink nudge nudge:

I forgot to say it last time, but you totally had me from the title - Milo and Otis is a movie I haven't seen in like 10 years but I still remember it :)

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Date: 2005-06-04 02:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm glad that the title worked for you. As an example of dogs and cats working together, that was the first thing that came to mind.

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Date: 2005-06-02 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siinik.livejournal.com
Aw, I love Pete. I felt so bad that he and Sam didn't get a happily ever after. Or at least a marriage. And this is such wonderful Pete, you got him down cold, he's such fun.

And whatever you do, don’t get in the middle; they only look like they disagree.

Hee! So true.

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Date: 2005-06-02 11:13 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Pete was a pretty nice guy. I really liked him. Even with the stalking (because it was so very much like a cop, wanting to make sure that the person you liked didn't have evil secrets).

Thank you.

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Date: 2005-06-02 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merryish.livejournal.com
Awwww, Pete. And also, Awwwww, Sam! This hurts, but in a good sweet way. And the picture of Jack and Daniel arguing like they'd be doing it for a long long time in the future... beautiful. =)

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Date: 2005-06-04 02:03 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you! And yeah, apparently the Stargate is all about now or future angst for me. Possibly because that's the element that the show itself focuses on least.

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Date: 2005-06-02 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yabyumpan.livejournal.com
That was very well done. I never really took to Pete on the show but you made me feel for him here. It's amazing to think the Sam could be so naive after all she's seen and been through but I really think she is. Poor Sam and Poor Pete. As an outsider, it's easy to see Jack'n'Daniel but I think Sam's just too close to both of them and maybe to her fantasies. Not a knock at Sam, she's just got a really big blind spot.

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Date: 2005-06-04 02:06 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you.

And yeah, with Sam, I really feel as though I never know. She's... I want to like her and do manage to do so in moments, but she has a lot of odd times when she acts so completely clueless and so sixteen.

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Date: 2005-06-04 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celestialseason.livejournal.com
I really like the fact that this story is in Pete's pov. It's interesting to see sg-1 from an outsider's perspective, and that Pete's detective skills show him there's something more between Jack and Daniel, and that Sam has feelings for Jack. It's also bittersweet to see Pete's thoughts here since we know what happens in the end. Thanks for writing this.

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Date: 2005-06-06 03:37 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you.

I really like the fact that this story is in Pete's pov. It's interesting to see sg-1 from an outsider's perspective, and that Pete's detective skills show him there's something more between Jack and Daniel, and that Sam has feelings for Jack. It's also bittersweet to see Pete's thoughts here since we know what happens in the end. Thanks for writing this.

Oddly, it's easier for me to write a happy story when I know that there's canon angst in store for the character.

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Date: 2005-06-04 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maraceles.livejournal.com
Awwww. Everyone has already pointed out the awesomeness of this fic, but I'd just like to give a little "Me, too!" to it all. Great fic. *g*

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Date: 2005-06-06 03:38 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you! That's really nice to hear.

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Date: 2005-06-05 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katie-m.livejournal.com
Excellent! Poor Pete, who really did mean well. Good job of creating an inner life for him, and nicely done with Sam, too--I think you really captured the way she acted when Pete and the rest of her life collided.

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Date: 2005-06-06 03:39 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Poor Pete, who really did mean well. Good job of creating an inner life for him, and nicely done with Sam, too--I think you really captured the way she acted when Pete and the rest of her life collided.

Yeah, I just thought of her extreme over-reaction when introducing Pete to her dad -- she has a couple of issues there, definitely.

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Date: 2005-06-05 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tafkarfanfic.livejournal.com
“But I’ve grown as a person since then and I’ve discovered solid colors.”
I died laughing at this.

And thank you, THANK YOU for giving us a story from Pete's point of view, and for making him be a good guy. I liked Pete a whole lot - I guess I'm in the minority on that one - and I wish they'd had him around more.

One of the things that he’d learned over the years was that it never paid to simply believe someone else, even someone he loved and trusted.
That is a very cop thing to think. You nailed it, right there.

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Date: 2005-06-06 03:42 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I died laughing at this.

I'm very glad that the banter worked. The banter is so much part of why I adore them so.

And thank you, THANK YOU for giving us a story from Pete's point of view, and for making him be a good guy. I liked Pete a whole lot - I guess I'm in the minority on that one - and I wish they'd had him around more.

I always liked Pete, too, but I am such a complete sucker for cops. And I'm thrilled that that aspect of him came through.

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Date: 2005-06-05 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingler.livejournal.com
He was a hell of a lucky guy.

Oooh, burrrn.

Very nice! (Well, not nice for Pete, I guess, but, you know what I mean.)

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Date: 2005-06-06 03:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2005-06-05 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frostfox.livejournal.com
And we were lucky to get such a nice, warm, loving story, thank you.

FF (who loved Pete and Sam together, sad sigh).

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Date: 2005-06-06 03:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
Thank you.

who loved Pete and Sam together, sad sigh

I really did think that they were sweet. It had potential.

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Date: 2005-06-12 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iconis.livejournal.com
Oh, so lovely! The different POV, and the banter, and the hopefulness. Meep. Thank you. :)

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Date: 2005-06-12 10:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] butterfly.livejournal.com
You're welcome and thank you for the feedback.

It was kinda nice to write about the guys from the outside.

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Date: 2007-09-26 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tresa-cho.livejournal.com
Aww, that was absolutely gorgeous. Well done!

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