Huh, okay. That Spock is broken in various ways is a completely acceptable premise (though the story seemed to skim above most issues in Spock's case; his obliviousness, willful or not, sort of functioned against the story in tight POV as far as expressing Spock's damage went). I do wonder however--what is your construction of Jen, that her damage doesn't function in a way that would make her pissed off at Spock's behavior, especially given what she's already frustrated with in most men's behavior?
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Date: 2009-06-13 04:14 am (UTC)