Mace does seem almost extremely grudge-holding in the films, at least to me. Which has always kind of disturbed me because nobody else in the films seems to realize that this is an extremely bizarre attitude for a Jedi Master to have, you know?

Well, the Jedi Council really was on the way out, in many ways. Arrogance was taking over. If they'd taken the time out to actually think and try to understand, they might have saved themselves.

The description of the girl was quite nice. I could picture her very well.

Thank you!

Anakin doesn't have the ability to stop, even when he has people trying to teach him how and telling him when he needs to. It's no doubt the reason why he's so darn effective at fighting in the Clone Wars. It's definitely the reason why I think he'd keep on pushing at Obi-Wan, wearing down his walls and refusing to take "no" for an answer, no matter how firmly Obi-Wan tries to keep his feet planted in denial-land. *Grins*

It's certainly true that Anakin doesn't have a clear sense of where the logical limitations should be. Part of what makes him great and part of what makes him fall.

Of course, White Rabbits is wonderful and I want to read more of it (got any new chapters up?), but when you get done with that, maybe you'll do us a favor and go back to Anakin in his campaign to win over Obi-Wan?

Thank you! I just posted a new part, actually.

And we'll have to see, sequel-wise. Depends on how loud Anakin gets. Never say never.