Obi-Wan giving the Talk. Oh dear, I had to laugh, a little. But otherwise this is truly a sad chapter. Anakin feeling all the bad emotions, ones that he engendered in the past, but yet maybe his future, that's too depressing. Him actually wanting to be back in the Temple he knew--the old story of what we don't know what we have until it's gone, past hope or redemption.
Some tiny bit of humor was needed, definitely. Poor Anakin, indeed. He did mean it all for the best.
The last few lines had me in tears. You're a very good and powerful writer.
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Some tiny bit of humor was needed, definitely. Poor Anakin, indeed. He did mean it all for the best.
The last few lines had me in tears. You're a very good and powerful writer.
Thank you.