neotoma.livejournal.com ([identity profile] neotoma.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] butterfly 2005-07-27 05:43 pm (UTC)

I like the little Luke & Leia bit. You'll really have them being all sibling-y. And Leia is going to calm *Han* down? Really? Because those two generally spur each other to new heights of emotion. Luke is the calm one.

Whatever was keeping Ben away wasn’t external – he was still here, but actively choosing not to appear.

Actively choosing not to appear, or being sat on by one of the other known Force-spirits? Or, more likely, I suppose, he's sitting on Ghost!Anakin and making sure he doesn't do something rash...

And the ship was rapidly approaching the Temple – Luke could feel it on the edges of his awareness, howling.

Howling? Crap, just how bad is the Temple? Psychometric death echoes all around or worse?

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