Ahaha, I am so behind on my reading, I really am. Sorry it took me so long. I'm going to read this bit by bit, and I'm pretty slow, but I will read this, because you've got me intrigued.

This is very nice so far, very interesting. You've got good pacing, and a plot (and I do so love plots). Your Anakin and Obi-Wan are well-characterized, and your language use is well-done. I really like this so far. I knew by skimming it that it was good, but this is good. Damn good. I think it's the best I've seen, and I've had to read a lot of fics for jedi_news, or at least skim them. I really look forward to reading more, but alas, I'm ona time crunch and have to get back to work now. Will read more chapters in a day or two. Bravo to you, dear.