ext_14282 ([identity profile] rabidfangurl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] butterfly 2005-08-28 09:54 pm (UTC)

Damn. I wish I could pack so much love into so few words.

And he was panting and Anakin was still holding him so tenderly, and Obi-Wan still couldn’t speak.

Anakin stroked along Obi-Wan’s body and his touch felt surreal. Anakin was touching him so softly, so gently, as if Obi-Wan might break under him.

I think those were my favorite parts. Between the channeling of Anakin's passion into gentleness, and the subtle manifestation of Anakin's fear (with the overtones of him destroying the people he loves), it's just so *right*.

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